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Но ведь это явно написал не "отечественный разработчик". Сейчас тебе нарисую, как это выглядело бы от нашего.
Here you are, face to face with strange intruders. For professionals, with all the cool hardware and stuff they look… well, special. Winston and Adelline are back at arguing. What they’re arguing about escapes you. So it does Shizuya, apparently. She wiped her nose, leaned to the wall, shaking her head. Her hands were already unscrewing the flask previously hidden in her trench coat. Eagle on the flask demonstrated his wings as flask rolled bottom up.
"Frigging neck. Can't make things right, liquid simply must go down the threading… hmm?"
You look at the flask neck. Faint smell of cognac fills the premises, escaping the black hole of obliviousness. Tiny drop runs down the leatherette protector. Runs, runs… and dies in the fabric of cheap, well worn fingerless wool gloves.
Take the flask/Turn it away
"Nah"
"Won't insist. I am Toddy gal myself, but hey, can't keep it hot on the go".
Ошибки, полное неприятие "it" к животным, целая куча неуместных жаргонизмов, словно писатель сбежал с энциклопедии мемов с непременным ударом в чуть ли не нуарный BS, обилие слов-паразитов, топорное орудование временами и большой акцент на жестах.
